Love – A Poem By Prof. Shaheena Asif From Her Book “The Ordinary Woman”

 

                                              

                                              LOVE ?

 

Who will love me?

When I am –

Beautiful and dutiful

Joking and laughing

Healthy and wealthy

Kind and helpful

Just any body and everybody

 

 

Who will love me?

When I am –

Sad and bad

Demanding and commanding

Lazy and crazy

Fat and ugly

Unwell and poor

Just no body and nobody

5 Responses to “Love – A Poem By Prof. Shaheena Asif From Her Book “The Ordinary Woman””

  • Hina Sheikh:

    Shallow but very nice n true!!!
    Always love poetry.

  • Sitarah Anjum:

    Yes shallow but unfortunately this is the bitter truth! Nice poem.

  • Rabiya Ahsan:

    Very thought provoking and contains the real depth. Yes that is very ugly reality. People accept others with their positives but not ready to own with their negatives.

  • Rehana yakoob:

    Prof Shaheena i was so touched by the words in your poem .It depicts a beautiful you. So realistic – so true – Beautifully you used the words everybody and nobody
    May God Bless the Hand That writes so beautifully. May God bless you Happiness .Keep writing and share

  • Asif Ali:

    You need rhetoric, more chops/grinds/cuts to mince what is in your mind, basically you have rhymed – Not trying to dis-heart you but I am sure you can do it much better – concentrate on your thoughts, think and the words will flow more easily – don’t worry about rhyming……

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